Writing Center

This semester I did not go to the writing center although I regret that because I believe that it would have helped me with my writing process. I did schedule an appointment but the writing center schedule was messed up and it kicked me out of the appointment schedule. During my revision process I reread my paper with my mom who is an english major. She helped me correct run-on sentences and punctuation issues.
      After that during class when we peer edited I took the suggestions in my paper and put it into a final draft. Next I read my paper out loud to see if it flowed properly and I could read it fluently. Next I looked at spelling errors and found non. The revision process helped me get my paper in order to turn it in.

Lathans Prompt

In a perfect world there are many things that would change. People would not cheat or steal because everyone would be so giving. And there would be no poverty because there should be no people that are poor and mistreated. Another thing is that there would be no stereotypes and discrimination towards any race because I believe that God made you your race for a reason and you shouldn't be discriminated by it.
       Also another thing is that all things were free no matter what. So that no matter who you are you can have just as much as the other person. Next thing that I would do would be to create an antidote to all the world's diseases to create a happier environment filled with less death.

Stowe Vermont

      Every year during Christmas time my family and I take a trip to Stowe Vermont to ski. This is a very fun time of year because when we arrive in Vermont we go to see my 90-year-old great grandmother who lives in the mountains and we arrive there there's a frozen Creek icicles and snow all visible. After we get there we have dinner and visit with her.
      Next we go to a ski resort call the Von Trapp's ski resort. And we stay there for about 4 1/2 days and do nothing but ski. The first day we usually ski green slopes which are easy and fun. Next we ski blues and blacks which are more challenging but so much of a better site. This is one of the trips that I always remember because of the memories that happened on it. I hope we go back this year.

Literary analysis Work

For me this Literary analysis paper was very challenging due to the fact that I literally ran out of words to put onto the page. After I wrote down my thesis and the quotations i had found I was only onto the bottom of the second age wondering how in the world I was going to complete the third page. So I quickly found more quotes and analyzed them to add to my draft.
       After I did that I had to  put it on paper. I find that the most difficult part reading the information from an outline and putting it into words the your teacher can follow. Next after I wrote down all of the Information that got me down to the third page I finally wrote my conclusion and finished my rough draft.